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aNGeL!ne: 1st rank for 3 years since junior high school... v!cHaN: Bullying(n_n), oh no.. that's just a joke. not my true act. hehehhehe... eVeL!ne: Always be confident o! SKD: Screaming is my life(>o<)AAARGGGHHHH!!!! "Mother"Cindy: I love smiling(^_^)CHEEZE.... dOrA: Good partner for screaming with SKD... JeMMy: What's his name? What's your name? What's her name?

Tuesday, March 27, 2007

There The Story Goes Part V

Continued by Eveline

The only way to get his job completed quickly, was asking Kim, Phil's exgirlfriend who gave him the glasses to make him a new glasses but on the other hand, Phil felt uncomfortable to ask her an effort because they have broken up for couple of years...But.... Phil still have to continue to complete his job in order not to be killed by his boss and he wasn't able to quit from the secret company, he was looked after by his boss when he was a baby because his parents had left him in the street...That's what his boss did when his boss did not enough people to be his secret agent... (Corrected)




Ok, this is great. It's wonderful to find out about some of Phil's background. I was interested from the outset on what had happened in Phil's life. How had he got his skills. Now, you're answering thos mysteries.

The language here is brilliant. There are very few mistakes. Just a couple of little things:

Phil's ex-girlfriend who gave him the glasses to make him a new glasses but in other hand
we say on the other hand
I have no idea why, it would make more sense to talk about things in hands rather than on but English has some very silly vocab.

Phil felt uncomfort - ok, another bit of weirdness. The noun 'comfort', is complimented with the negative 'discomfort'. Here, I think you'd be safer with the adjective 'comfortable' or rather with the negative form 'uncomfortable'.

Phil still have to continue to complete ...
I think you can sort this one out yourself.

in order not to be killed by his boss
Brilliant!!!

he's kept by his boss when he's baby because his parents left him by the street...
Ok, the passive is good but the tenses here are a bit complicated. The story is set in the past so all of the events that occurred before the story should be described using a past perfect form. Remember, if you say when something happened you don't have to used the past perfect but if you don't refer to the time, you need to use it to show the order of events.

He was kept (actually, 'he was looked after'... is better) when he was a baby.
The
'when he was a baby' clause lets us know the order of events.

Now, everyone can understand that his parents left him in the streets before his boss started looking after him but English is a silly language and so you should have used the past perfect. Compare:

He was looked after by his boss when he was a baby because his parents had left him in the street...

when his boss has not enough people

Past simple negative statements use 'did' as an auxilliary.

All in all, a fantastic effort on your fantastic blog. Well done Eveline and keep it up Super Teens.

Friday, March 23, 2007

There The Story Goes part IV

Continued by Vivi

It broke into two pieces...
Phil wanted to cry, because that glasses had been given by someone who loves him so much.
So, he went home, opened his "secret company" site and ordered the glasses. But... He started to throw his laptop because he couldn't buy the glasses immediately as they had no stock anymore. Another agent had bought the last one just a couple of minutes ago. The glasses would be restock two months later and that meant Phil would have to wait until the next two month to get the stupid things which meant his job would be submitted late. (Corrected)
Well done Bully, you haven't left us with a cliff hanger like Cindy's but this is still great. What's going to happen to Phil if he is late completeing his asignment. What will his boss do? What will he do in Medan while he is waiting for his glasses to arrive? Who is the mysterious person that loved him so much? There are still many questions left to be answered. I hope you guys will continue the story and give me an answer.
Your blog looks really great.
I'm going to make a few comments about the language.
Continued by Vivi
It broke into two pieces... (ask Cindy about this or check out the previous post) Phil wanted to cry, because that glasses was given by someone who loves him so much.
Firstly, fantastic. This is a perfect example of when to use the passive voice. Unfortunately, it's not quite right. Ok, this is a bit complicated. As there is no time reference in the sentence (to show the order of events), to show that the gift of the glasses happened before Phil wanted to cry, we would normally used the past perfect. I know it looks a bit complicated, and it is but it's not very difficult.
First action - someone gives Phil the glasses.
Second action - Phil wanted to cry.
Phil wanted to cry because those glasses had been given to him by someone who really loved him.
If you're confused, I'm sure you can figure it out if you speak to me. (I can give you some nice exercises!!!)
So, he went home, opened his "secret company" site and ordered the glasses. But... He started to throw his laptop
Hmmm, a typical Bully reaction - did he actually attack his computer?
because he couldn't buy the glasses immediately (very good) that (as) they had no stock anymore.
Another agent had bought the last one just a couple minute ago. (a couple of minutes ago)
Here you've used the past perfect perfectly, well, why did I bother with that stuff above, you can obviously do this.
The glasses will restock two months later (what happens to will in the past?) and it means (that meant) Phil must wait (would have to wait) until the next two month to get the stupid thing (s) which made (meant) his job will be (would be) submitted late.
Ok, this sentence has a couple of tense issues, mostly because of the modals.
All in all, a very good effort. Well done Bully.

Thursday, March 22, 2007

There The Story Goes part III

The next day, he looked for the camera, but… He still couldn't find anything… “What’s wrong with my crazy stupid little camera?” The shopkeeper looked at Phil (What’s wrong with this man?). Phil was kicked out of the shop by the shopkeeper. He went back to his apartment and switched on his laptop. He looked at the location of that small camera. He viewed it for a minute… three hours… And, “OH MY GOD! I forgot to use my special glasses” (special glasses to look at invisible objects)’>.<’ He looked for his glass, “where did I put it?” He searched for them everywhere, and gave up; he sat down on his cozy sofa for a while and think… “2 days ago, I went to that shop with Nelly (the girl he met in STARBUCK), I went back home with glasses in my coat’s pocket. Now, where is my coat? *OH, I took it to Laundry Service.” He ran down to Laundry Corner, he asked the maid to find his coat. Finally, he found his glasses. And… OH!!! (Corrected)

To be continued………………..

Again Cindy, this is really good. You have answered the questions you left us with at the end of the previous installment and set up some new ones to maintain the tension. I'm actually reading this story as a reader first and then going back to it as a teacher. You have completely cleared up most of your problems with tenses now and although you're sticking on articles a bit, most of your problems are vocabulary based. Have you got a good dictionary on your computer? I use mine all the time.

Well done Cindy, keep it up.


There The Story Goes part III


Continued by Cindy.

The next day, he looked for that camera
(this is fine but perhaps the camera '2nd time rule') ,
but… He still didn’t find anything
(again, not really wrong but it would have been better to use he couldn't find it)…
What’s wrong with my crazy stupid little camera?” The shopkeeper looked at Phil (What’s wrong with this man?). Phil was kicked out of that shop (the shop) by the shopkeeper. He went back to his apartment and switched on his laptop. He looked at the location of that small camera (ha ha). He viewed it for a minute… three hours… And, “OH MY GOD! I forgot to use my special glasses” (special glasses to look at invisible objects)’
very good - what are the differences between look at/look for/watch>.
<’ He looked for his glasses, “where did I put it?”
(Glasses are one of those strange counter intuitively plural things. We say a pair of glasses and a pair of trousers so the word is replaced by the pronoun them.)
He searched it everywhere (he searched for them), and gave up; he sat down on his cozy sofa for a while and think (hmmm, I think you know what the problem is here. It would be neatest to use an ... Infinitive of Purpose, so, he sat down on his cozy sofa for a while to think)… “2 days ago, I went to that shop with Nelly (girl he met in STARBUCK)
(second time 'the girl he met in Starbucks),
I went back home with my glasses in my coat’s pocket. Now, where is my coat? *OH, I took it to Laundry Service.” He ran down to Laundry Corner, he asked the maid to find his coat
(What maid? Whose maid?).
Finally, he found his glasses. And… OH!!! To be continued………………..

Wednesday, March 21, 2007

There The Story Goes part II

continued by Cindy Siwan.

As he'd arrived in his apartment, he switched on his laptop in order to spy the situation of the jewelery shop. He looked at his laptop for a minute... an hour... two hours... five hours... and switched off the laptop, he didn't get any precious information. The next day, he went back to the shop to unplug the small camera, but he couldn't find it, "where is it?" He checked every side of the shop, unfortunately he didn't find anything. *OH MY GOD! That's the most expensive camera that I've ever had! ~_~"* He went back to his apartment and checked the signal of the camera from his laptop. There is a signal from the camera, it must be stuck on the wall of that shop, so why couldn't he find it? (Corrected)

To be continued.......

This is fantastic Cindy! The story is really getting interesting now. I love that you've set up some tension with the mystery, a true cliffhanger. So who's going to continue the story? I can't wait to find out what happens next. On top of that, there are some superb structures here, I'm very impressed:
"he switched on his laptop in order to spy" this is great, - one small thing, you normally spy on someone or something.
"he didn't get any precious information" again, fantastic - precious is a lovely adjective but it is usually used for things that are important to you on a personal level. Kind of, things that are important to your heart, things you love.
"The next day, he went back to that shop to unplug the small camera, but he couldn't find it, " Remember the work we did on articles, as the shop has already been introduced, you can use the for the shop. It's the 2nd time rule. After that, you use a great infinitive of purpose: - Why did he go back to the shop? To unplug his camera. - spies use small cameras, they are usually referred to as miniature cameras.
"He check every sides of the shop," oops, I think you know what the main problem is here. Every, is used with singular nouns - remember the Police song - Every breath I take.
"That's the most expensive camera that I've ever had!" Brilliant!
"There is a signal from the camera, it must be sticked on the wall of that shop, so how can't he find it?" A couple of little tense problems here. Stick is irregular - Stick, stuck, stuck. The last question should read; so why couldn't he find it?
All in all, a great chapter in the continuing drama of the mysterious Phil.

Saturday, March 17, 2007

There the story goes......

A story about a secret agent who worked at a company to gather some informations in Medan...

His name is Phil,
He went to the mall early and sat in Starbucks reading the newspaper and drinking a cappuccino...

at the same time, he looked at the FELICE jewellery shop in the opposite of STARBUCK, which is the richest jewerelly shop in Sun Plaza. When the shop opened, he started to go into the shop with a girl he met in Starbucks cafe. He promised to buy a diamond for the girl. She is a sweet girl, falling in love with Phil in the first sight, but she didn't know that Phil only wanted to use her for his job. She went with Phil to the FELICE shop. Phil asked her to look for the diamond she wanted, while he tried to stick the small camera into the shop. He's sure no one realized it because it's size is too small about 0,001 mm. (Corrected)

A story about a secret agent who worked at a company to gather some informations (information is uncountable - some information, a piece of information, a few pieces of information) in Medan...

His name is Phil, He went to the mall early and sat in Starbucks reading the newspaper and drinking a cappuccino...

at the same time, he looked for (look for something to find it, look at something when you know where it is - do you mean watched? what's the difference) the FELICE jewellery shop in the opposite (you tell me) of STARBUCK, which is the richest jewerelly shop in Sun Plaza. When the shop opened, he started to go into the shop with one of the girl (how many girls did he meet) he met in the (Starbucks is a name so you don't need an article) Starbuck cafe. He promised to buy a diamond for the girl(nice guy? - stupid girl?). She is a sweet girl, falling in love with phil in the first sight (fantastic), but she didn't know that phil (he may be a bad man, but I think he still deserves a capital for his name) only wanted to use her for his job. She went with phil to the FELICE shop. Phil asked her to look for the diamond she wanted, while he tried to stick the small camera (hmmm, why should this be 'a small camera'?) into the shop. He sure no one realized it because the size is too small about 0,001 mm. (This sentence is a bit whacky, don't forget about subjects and verbs).

Thanks, whoever did this. Pass the story on to another member of your team. I want to know what happens next. Well done so far!

Wednesday, March 14, 2007

Questions....Questions... and Questions.... *what CRAZY questions these are...*

Ok, today.... Mr. Radford told us to make questions and sent it to other groups, and now we have these questions that they sent to us.....
We have 23 papers with.. crazy questions..

Let's see these questions and the answers we wrote,
first.. to the editor, Ruby
1. Can you tell me what the hell is your boyfriend's name?
- My boyfriend is Prince Charles, Edison, Daniel Radcliffe. I feel confused to choose one of them to be my husband.
2.Why can you be proud of yourself? *the answer can't be proud again!!!*
- Because I have many fans and they will do what I asked.

ok, that's all questions that sent to Ruby and her silly answer.

second, Pearl
1. Why do you act like a children (children is the plural form ('a' means 1) so it should be child) and funny (funny is an adjective which should describe a noun, this word is describing the verb 'act' - what should it be) ?
- hohoho.... Thanks for the attention...

Then, Diamond
1. Can you tell me who you love?
- I love who love me
2. Still going on with Benny?
- he....hi....ho....ha......
3. When would I have your wedding party and also a ceremony in Paris?
- I don't know. You just wait.

That's all Diamond's...

yackk.. jump to Emerald's....
1. Do you still love William Rudson? Tell me the truth!!!
- NO! *I thought it's already the truth*
2. Why your face like Dora the Explorer?
- I don't think so!! Don't gossip too much, you know!? Week..
3. Are you a Panda?
- No, I'm not! I'm a Human!

So..so... Garnet's!
1.What things that you can proud of yourself to life and have a boyfriend?
- That's nothing I can proud of myself, because I'm not forever. As long as I'm happy, then there's nothing 2 be proud!!
2. What the hell did you eat this morning and last night?
- I ate porridge


And Crystal....
1. Do you like people call you 'Bully'? Why if yes or no?
- Not really hate that 'nickname'. Because friends seldom call me that 'nickname', yeahh... the one who calls me 'Bully' is Mr. Radford.. :p Enjoy whatever they like to call you as long as they don't hate you! hehehehhe...
2. What do you prefer, romantic guy or humorious guy?
- I like humorious one, because he could make me smile everytime I want *I wish...*
3. Will you marry when you're 25?
- I don't know. It's my future, I can't tell what will be happened in my future..
4. Why do you always act like a child?
- Because I like it!

Then, the last from Super Teens.... "Turqoise"..... *and also the only man in this group*
I think he has a lot of fans... We have 8 questions for him! *Wow*
let's start from the first one,
1. Have you ever slept with your girl?
- I always sleep with girl whose initial is SL. She asks me to come to her home to sleep with her in one room.
2. Why is your blog name very funny? And why you gave this name for your blog?
- That's the fact. We're SUPER. I don't think it's a bad name.
3. Are you lonely when you fight with someone?
- I don't feel lonely; because I already has someone who loves me.
4. Why you don't want to be friend with Budianto?
- Because he is selfish and always want to disturb me . And the final, I'll never speak to him again.
5. This question has been deleted by Mr. Radford because it was not really appropriate. You filthy minded so and so!!!
6. Do you like Eveline?
- Absobloddylutely No...! Because she's funny so I stay close to her just for playing!

Do not change this answer!!!!!
7. What type of girl do you like?
- The girl must have long hair ; beautiful ; have propotional body ; clever ; can cook ; not wear glasses.
8. Why do you suck?
- I don't think I'm suck ; I'm a funny friend, may be you're suck.

Then, that's all... Enjoy it and don't forget to put comments for our improval....

Tuesday, March 13, 2007

SuperTeens's Hometown Part 1 -'bout plazas-

Our hometown is Medan.
Medan is a city that's growing up to become a Metropolitan City. *i thought it would be very long time to make it happen :p*

Let's talk about plazas in Medan!
Nowadays, Medan has grown so fast. Just by few years past, 3 malls have been built.



How is Sun Plaza Looks like. It's one of the newest and the biggest Plaza in Medan. The other one is Medan Fair.



Plazas in Medan :
1. Sun Plaza
2. Medan Fair
3. Grand Palladium
4. HongKong Plaza
5. Makro
6. Brastagi The Five Star Market
7. Medan Mall
8. Perisai Plaza
9. Deli Plaza, Sinar Plaza, Menara Plaza (mergered into one mall)
10. Thamrin Plaza
11. Yanglim Plaza
12. Millenium Plaza (Phone Trading Center)

Some plazas are in processing now. Like City Walk *it's located just in front of Merdeka Walk*.

Cat's Faces.....


Their face look like our face in many situations... hehehhehehehehee....

Welcome To SuperTeens

Hey Guys.... Welcome to SuperTeens's Blog ! Just be yourself here. This group has 7 member, they are Eveline as the leader, and the others are Cindy, Sherli, Angeline, Pandora, Vivi, and Jemmy. *Seems that almost all the members are girls, :p*

We make this Blog as the part of our "boring" assignment which Mr. Radford asked .

You can know what we like, what we hate, what we've done, and what is our hometown like.

last, but not least... enjoy urself!